Merry Christmas! (Or Seasonal Greeting of your Preference)
[Excerpt from Untitled Outlander Prequel, Copyright © 2022 Diana Gabaldon]
Brian Fraser and Murtagh FitzGibbons Fraser are hiding out on one of the battlements of Castle Leoch, where they’ve sneaked in to take part in the funeral festivities for the recently deceased Chief, Red Jacob MacKenzie. Brian would be worse than unwelcome, if anyone recognizes him as the Old Fox’s son, illegitimate or not, and the two young men are keeping out of the way while they figure things out. There are several doves sitting in the sun on the wall near them, and Brian very slowly inches close to them. He’s just inveigled one into sitting on his hand (he’s done this trick before), when a tall young woman comes striding out of a doorway at the end of the battlement near them, but comes to an abrupt stop when she sees what’s up.
Brian saw her from the corner of his eye—a braw lass, tall—very tall—square-shouldered and looking well able to mind herself should things come to blows. From the corner of one eye, he caught sight of fluttering red hair, loosened for mourning, he supposed. She’d stopped when she saw them, but now came toward them, stepping slow and careful.
He could feel the dove’s heart, beating in his palm, soft and rapid. His own blood pulsed in his ears, not much slower. The young woman came to a halt, three paces from him; he didn’t look at her, but heard the rustle of her petticoats and felt his heart speed up to match the dove’s.
She watched with interest, still as a nesting quail herself, so as not to startle the dove. Brian moved his other hand slowly into the fold of his plaid, broke off a corner of the lump of bread he’d put away in case of sudden hunger, and moving still more slowly, brought it up and placed it delicately between his lips. The dove shoogled its head a bit, nervous at this novel development, but its eyes were bright and fixed on the bread.
He made a faint “tchi, tchi, tchi,” between his teeth and the bird drew itself up, interested. He turned his hand, little by little, to cause the dove to change its footing in order to stay upright, and ended with her on the back of his hand, her sharp wee claws digging in a bit. Smooth and slow, he brought her up to his face, still making the shooshing noise, so she wouldn’t be startled by his breath.
One second… two seconds… the dove turned her head, one way and then the other, fixing one eye at a time on the desired crumb. Three seconds… f— The dove darted out her neck like a snake and pecked the crumb neatly from his lips, launching herself off his hand in the same movement.
“Mother of God!” Brian and the lass both said, startled. They looked at each other and laughed. They were still looking a moment later, when a high female voice raised in exasperation from a window above jerked the lassie’s attention upward and away.
“Tha mi direach a’ tighinn!” she shouted, adding—in a lower tone and with lowering brow—“Take care ye dinna swallow your own spit and die, ye wee besom.”
He laughed again, and she looked at him again, deep blue eyes still creased into triangles of amusement.
“Do that wi’ a raven, a charadh,” she said. “And I’ll be truly impressed.”
And then she was gone in a flurry of skirts, loose hair flying like a shower of gold, hot from the forge.
He stood still for a moment, staring into the empty doorway as though he could make her reappear there. Instead, Murtagh came out of the shelter of a nook where he had tactfully receded.
“I should ha’ paid more attention when ye did that the first time,” he said, nodding at Brian’s hand, where the dove’s claws had left small red scratches. “But I’m of that braw lassie’s opinion, a bhalaich— ye’ll have to do it with a raven. And then move on to owls, maybe. Did ye ken who she is?” he asked, dropping his mocking.
“She lives in the castle,” Brian said, lifting his chin toward the tower above, “or yon female coo up there wouldna have been bawling for her. And given what I’ve heard of Red Jacob MacKenzie’s looks, I’ll wager ye a quart o’ beer that’s the eldest daughter. Ellen, is it—her name?”
“Aye, Ellen.” Now Murtagh was peering into the dark doorway, too. “And aye, that was her. I was down in the courtyard a wee while ago and someone pointed her out to me; she’d come down to welcome a tacksman come in wi’ his henchmen. She was dressed that wee bit better, mind, but no mistaking a lass that size for anyone else. Christ, she’s as tall as me!”
“Taller,” Brian said, laughing. He glanced at Murtagh’s spindly shanks. “And likely weighs twice as much.” He felt like he’d already drunk the quart of beer—too fast. His head seemed light and slightly foamy.
Murtagh shrugged. “If ye’re on top, what does it matter?”
“And what if ye’re not?”
“Aye, well, she might crush me, that’s true. But I’d die happy.”
“Let’s be going,” Brian said, as the sounds of multiple feet and men’s voices announced the imminent advent of a large party. “Anyone sees us who kens us, we’ll just die.”
“Well, aye, you will. My Auntie Glenna willna let ‘em kill me.”
“How long is it since ye last saw her?”
“Och, ten years, maybe twelve…”
“Ye didna even have a beard, twelve years ago. She willna ken ye from a hole in the ground. And ye willna be having much conversation wi’ her, either, wi’ your teeth knocked out. Come on!” He grasped Murtagh’s upper arm and yanked him toward the door at the other end of the battlement.
I took the image above during the first few days of December, 2022, in Flagstaff. I was leaving Lowell Observatory, and paused on the overlook (which gives you a panoramic view of the city below). I took one more step, and a herd of seven or eight mule deer scattered from the forest right below me. This lovely creature stayed a moment, though…
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Interesting, I will be waiting for the next tantalising insight to how Brian marries Ellen and Murtagh’s adventures
Just loved this excerpt! I got the biggest kick out of Murtagh, even as a young man he was a worry wart!
I finished ‘Bees’ months ago and waiting with baited breath for the next book. It is so nice to be able to read a book with mention of things I grew up with like Green Grow the Rushes oh. I came to The Outlander series through the television but quickly bought all the books and have read and re read them all.
I enjoy the fact that you construct your sentences so beautifully and I have no need to grit my teeth as I read. Please do not make us wait too long for the next book.
Thank you so much Diana for this little peek into Brian Fraser, Ellen MacKenzie and Murtagh’s early relationship! Looking forward to this one and Book 10!
Another fine example of why Outlander is not just a story, but a whole universe full of fleshed-out characters that each have their own interesting origins and adventures. I think at this point, Diana could write about the stable lad’s breakfast and it would be a page-turner. Come to find out, the lad once had an auntie who disappeared suddenly and was believed to have gone away with the fairies.
I can’t wait for this prequel! Im intrigued already!
The detail in your work is wonderful. You are one of the few authors whose stories I have enjoyed to the extent I find I am happy to re-read them and still be enthralled.
I like your witty way of talking about and carefully describing the various qualities of your Outlander fans.
I look forward to Book 10 in the series having just re-read all the previous 9 and have now got into the process of reading the Lord John series, as well as some of the accompanying Outlander novellas.
From a proud Scot who has learnt far more of the actions of the Scots and their diaspora from you.
This sounds very interesting, I would like to know more of Brian Fraser as a young man. Looking forward to your next books, I have read and re-read all the Outlander books and enjoy them each time. Elizabeth
I love all your books, and have read [and reread ] numerous times. awaiting with bated breath both the pre-quell and book 10. Also awaiting the latest installment of the tv series.